近来，全国正在进行平安校园建设，我市也不例外。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自

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热心网友时间：2023-09-10 20:52

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Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Daming

试题分析：本题是应用文写作，写一封倡议书。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，为了让表达更符合逻辑，可以适当使用序数词；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。