求帮忙写一封申请加薪的邮件,下有很详细的内容包括工资哦 非常感谢...
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发布时间：2022-04-29 10:54
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时间：2023-02-24 07:10
Dear manager,
How time flies,I have been in our company for several months.During this period of time,I can be confident to say that lots of problems of company have been improved , no matter proction materials or quality on proction field.The growth of suppliers is also speeding up obviously.There isn't almost any significant quality problem which get in the way of manufacturing schele.So, to the whole company,in my opinion,I have showed my value as an indivial.
Since all things above, as well as the heavy and complex workloads,I would like to apply for an increase in pay in order to serve our company better.I have attached the salary bill of July to the email,from which you can see that nearly all the items got dected except base pay.Af last, I gained too little.When I was asked by my families,I felt shameful to be honest.Such income has brought much pressure and mental load to me.
My qualifying period is too long.So I have talked with personnel Sam and we have reached a consensus that I will get adjustment in pay accordingly if my behavior is good.Till now my income is still far below what an engineer should get,and it nearly equals that of an inspector.That is unfair to me, and I feel stressed and unbalanced.
Due to all the reasons, I would like to apply an increase in month pay to 6500 yuan.I really hope to gain your permission and help.
If possible, this news will be the best gift for my birthday this year.Looking forward to your reply.
个人觉得楼主的语气很诚恳，并无生硬。
个人建议，如果是写给外企外国老板的信件，最好是开头直奔主题。然后在阐述原因：I am writing to apply for an increase in pay.“我写这封信是为了申请加薪。”
本人水平有限，不敢保证没有用语不当指出。既然是求助于我团，还望我们能够给楼主提供满意的答案，请楼主等待我团团长检查和回复，谢谢！
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