托福英语写作漂亮结尾怎么写

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热心网友 时间：2022-06-28 09:11

一、重申立场

"It is
difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing
important aspects of a fulfilling personal life."

In
conclusion, given the growing demands of career on today's
professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working
smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices.

二、重申立场+总结理由

"Since
science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern
society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and
technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities."

In
conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and
humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in
mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of
our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover,
disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for
evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper
direction.

三、让步+重申立场

"Job
security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on
years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service
discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of
proctivity."
In the
final analysis, the statement correctly identifies job performance as
the single best criterion for salary and job security. However, the
statement goes too far, it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary
increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and, in the
end, proctivity, but also is required by fairness.
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