求优美精准的英语翻译两:人在戏中戏在 人生莫演糊涂戏 境由心造心由境造境界需除名利心
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发布时间：2023-03-18 07:44
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热心网友
时间：2023-11-30 17:40
"People are in a play which is within themselves,
don't act a muddled play in your life."
境由心造 心由境造 境界需除名利心
" The state of mind is generated by the heart which is created by itself,
remove the terrestrial interests from your heart."
人在舞中 舞在人中 人生莫作不舞鹤
" People are in a dance which is within themselves,
don't make your life be a crane that cannot dance ."
（经过三次修改，使原意现在完全符合英语本身的语言习惯的了，且语法上无问题。）
【公益慈善翻译团】真诚为你解答！追问感谢你们的回答~【高效率啊~】有几个地方我觉着和我个人理解的不太一致，能不能稍改下。
1 原文里面的“境”字在我的理解里是“外在环境”。我对这四个字的理解是佛教意义上的那种唯心的思想“外在的一切都是虚幻的，管好自己的心才是真”所以“The state of mind ”放在这不太合适。
2 写不开，写到问题补充里了
追答原来如此。我得理解是“心境”由“心造”啊。
我从"Don't cry for me Argentina " 里取到一个合适的词，
illusion “幻境”“梦幻”“假象”“错觉”
"And as for fortune, and as for fame
I never invited them in
Though it seemed to the world they were all I desired
They are (illusions )
They are not the solutions they promised to be."
" 至于功名利禄都是虚幻，全是浮云" 的感觉，应该与你后面的“需除名利心”是对应的。
所以"境由心造 心由境造 境界需除名利心" 是这样的：
" The illusion is generated from the heart which is created by itself,
remove the terrestrial interests from your heart to get to the state."
希望你能满意。
热心网友
时间：2023-11-30 17:40
