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发布时间：2022-07-01 22:03
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热心网友
时间：2023-10-22 12:02
The garden was basking under the late Autumn sun for the whole morning and then the afternoon, just like a ripened fruit falling, falling, and emitting strong aroma. Intermittently, Changan heard a melody of harmonica, stolidly playing the tune ‘Long, long ago’---“Tell me that story, my favorite old story; long, long ago……”. This was the present, but it would transform into long ago in a trice, and then it’s all over. Mesmerized, Changan went looking for the harmonica player----or rather herself. Against the sun she walked, and reached beneath a tree, she saw a boy in yellow shorts shimmying on a branch and playing a harmonica; but he was playing another tune which she had never heard before. The tree was not very big, the sparsely phoenix leaves were swinging under the sun like golden bells. Changan was looking face-up, her eyes hazed over and like a torrential rain, tears were covering all over her face.
2,夜深闻私语，月落如金盆。现在我寄住在旧梦里，在旧梦里做着新的梦。 写到这里，背上吹的风有点冷了，定去关上玻璃门，阳台上看见毛毛的黄月亮。 古代的夜里有更鼓，现在有卖馄饨的梆子，千年来无数人的梦的拍板：“托，托， 托，托”——可爱又可哀的年月呵！
Deep into the night I heard the merest whispering, the moon sank into the water and appeared like a golden basin. Now I am dwelling in my old dream while breeding a new one. Reaching here, I felt the cold breeze creeping on my back; so I went to close the glass doors, and from the balcony, I could see the hazy golden moon. In the old days you could hear the gong announcing the hours in the night, nowadays there were the wooden clappers of the wonton hawkers; for thousands of years, these were the dream clappers of countless people: ‘tuck, tuck, tuck tuck’----Oh, what lovely and miserable years! (如果强调文采，可以用 Oh, what lovely and melancholy years! )
3,昨天到叔惠家里去了一趟，我也知道叔惠不会在家的，我就是想去看看他的父亲母亲， 因为你一直跟他们住在一起的，我很希望他们会讲起你。叔惠的母亲说了好些关于你的事 情，都是我不知道的。她说你从前比现在还要瘦，又说起你在学校里时候的一些琐事。我听 她说着这些话，我真觉得非常安慰，因为--你走开太久了我就有点恐惧起来了，无缘无故 的。世钧！我要你知道，这世界上有一个人是永远等着你的，不管是在什么时候，不管你是 在什么地方，反正你知道，总有这样一个人。世钧看到最后几句，就好像她正对着他说话似的。隔着那悠悠岁月，还可以听见她的声 音。他想着："她难道还在那里等着我吗？"
3. “I went to Shuhui’s house yesterday with the full knowledge that he wouldn’t be home, because I just wanted to see his parents; since you had been staying with them, I hoped that they would talk about you. Shuhui’s mother had related a lot of things about you that were unknown to me. She had said that you were thinner before and she also recollected some trifles while you were in school. Listening to her words was an immense consolation to me, because. ..you have been away for too long and I have started to feel scared with no reasons at all. I want you to know, Shijun, there is a person in this world who will wait for you forever, irrespective of where and when, somehow you know there is this person.” Reading the last few lines, Shijun felt that as if she was having a conversation with him, he could still hear her voice with those long, long years apart. He asked himself, “Can she still be waiting for me there”?
注：第二段我还是给您翻译了，因为它很有挑战性！！另外，在这用ripen 还是比较恰当的。但我忘了加 ed, 将动词变为形容词。
热心网友
时间：2023-10-22 12:02
翻译就是学习的过程，在学习中翻译，在翻译中学习，看其他朋友的翻译增加了不少见识。不过，实话实说，就目前的水平，翻译叙事性的文章，还行；如要翻译情感，内心世界的东东，就难了。而且，很多时候，因为在日常工作中更偏重于口语，很少用一些书面的文学上的用词,就更别说，用哪个词更贴切了。（我想，即使用上了，我们大多数也很难体会所谓的意境）自己看过很多外国小说，中文版和英文版比较来看，就感觉看英语版只是看故事，根本无法体会。
所以，最后，想说，楼主不妨找专业翻译文学的人才吧。
感谢有这样一个平台，让大家相互学习，沟通，进步，很好！！
纯手工翻译，请忽略动词的过去式和现在式的区别，看你自己是想把故事作为现在来读还在作为过去来读，自己再改过来。
Soft whispers echo in the deepen night; moonset is like a gold basin. Now I was lived in the past to dream the feature. I felt the wind against me was a little cold when I wrote here. I stood up and went to close the glass window, I saw the moon hung up in the sky silently with yellow light and halo on the balcony. There was drum voice to tell the time in the night, now there is clapper voice to sell Won Ton, it is just like the voice of dreams of numberless peoples in the thousands of years: “ Tuo, Tuo, Tuo” ------ lovely and pitiful times!!
3． Yesterday, I went to ShuFen’s home. Actually, I knew she wasn’t at home at that time, but I really wanted to look at her parents. Because you have lived with them all along, I expected they would talk about you something. Fortunatelly, ShuFen’s mother said many things about you, which I didn’t know before. She said you were thinner before than now, and talked about your some interesting episodes happened in the school. I felt very comfortable when I heard your story from her, because you left so long time that I felt a little fear unconsciously.
ShiJun, I must let you know, some one will wait for you for ever in this world no matter when the time is and no matter where you are. I bet you must know there is the person.
ShiJun looked at the last sentences, he felt as if she was talking to him face to face. Through the endless time, as if he was hearing her voice. He talked to himself:” Isn’t she waiting for me?”
热心网友
时间：2023-10-22 12:03
只能看上几位的翻译
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热心网友
时间：2023-10-22 12:03
2, late at night heard murmur, such as Jinpen moonset. Now I live with in the dream, the dream where doing in the new dream. Wrote here back a bit cold wind blowing, and is scheled to close the glass door, the balcony to see the yellow moon Maomao. Gore has ancient night, and now have to sell the Bangzi wonton, thousands of years, the dream of countless people say: "care, child care, child care, child care" - can be sweet sorrow years Oh!
3, yesterday to叔惠went home, I also know叔惠not at home, and I just want to go see his father, mother, because you have been living together with them, and I very much hope that they will be talking about you.叔惠mother said some things about you, is I do not know of. She said you have to thin the past than it is now also talking about you in school when some chores. I listen to her speak these words, I really find it very comforting, because - you walked away too long I feel a bit scared of it, no reason at all. Shijun! I want you to know that this world will never have a person waiting for you, whether it was at any time, no matter where you are, anyway, you know, there will always be such a person. Shijun Finally see a few, just like she was facing him speak like. Across the long years it can also hear her voice. He thought: "Is she still there waiting for me?"
热心网友
时间：2023-10-22 12:04
2. smells whisper in the dead of night , month falls if golden basin. Now I firmly being attaching oneself to within old dream , am doing within old dream the new dream. The wind writing to here , boasting on the back has been a little bit cold , has fixed Huang Yue Liang who goes to close the glass door , to see a baby on the balcony. Have at night ancient more bulging, the watchman's clapper having selling a mpling soup now , the clapper doing innumerable people' dreams in 1000: "Support , support , support , support " are lovable the days being unable to may sorrowful breathes out on!
3.Yesterday the favor had got rid of a trip at home , I had also known uncle favor can not be at home to the uncle, I am to want to visit his father mother , they live because of you always follow together I hope that they may say up you very much. Uncle favor mother said quite a lot's thing about you , has been I don know's. She said you were before thinner than now Huan Yao , a little trifle bringing you up ring the period of in school. I listen to her be saying these words , I feel very conciliative really , I fear to have got up right away a little bit because of- - your take oneself off has been very long, neither rhyme nor reason's. World weight! That I ask you to know this has one people in the world, is to be waiting for you forever , always has such one people , disregarding when to be disregarding you are where , anyway you know. World weight sees several final sentences , as if seeming as if she is speaking to him right away. Be separated by that distant years , the sound being able to hear her. He is thinking of ": Is she waiting for me could it be said that as early as there?
热心网友
时间：2023-10-22 12:05
Garden in the late autumn day in advance of the morning sun had another one afternoon, as known to fruit in general, to fall forward, fall forward, to sweeten. Changan Vaguely harmonica heard voices, slow to blow the "Long, Long, Ago" - "tell me the story of the past that I am most beloved stories. A long time ago, long ago ... ..." This is now also one twinkling of an eye changed a long time ago, and everything finished. Changan Obsession like, to find that the Blowing personHarmonica - to find her own. Greeting the sun walked, walked under the tree, a boy wearing a yellow shorts riding on tree branches Edgeworthia transversion transversion, and blowing harmonica, but he wind was another tune, and she never heard of seen. Not the trees, the Ins Scarce leaf in the sun, shaking like a gold bell. Changan looked back, before a black, like the showers like, tear a string of Phi the face
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Murmur heard late at night, such as Jinpen moonset. Now I live with in the dream, the dream in doing in the new dream. Wrote here back a bit cold wind blowing, and is scheled to close the glass door, the balcony to see the yellow moon Maomao. Gore has ancient night, and now have to sell the Bangzi wonton, thousands of years, the dream of countless people say: "tuo,tuo,tuo," - can be sweet sorrow years Oh!
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shuhui yesterday went home, I also know shuhui not at home, and I just want to go see his father, mother, because you have been living together with them, and I very much hope that they will be talking about you.shuhui mother said some things about you, is I do not know of. She said you have to thin the past than it is now also talking about you in school when some chores. I listen to her speak these words, I really find it very comforting, because - you walked away too long I feel a bit scared of it, no reason at all. Shijun! I want you to know that this world will never have a person waiting for you, whether it was at any time, no matter where you are, anyway, you know, there will always be such a person. Shijun Finally see a few, just like she was facing him speak like. Across the long years it can also hear her voice. He thought: "Is she still there waiting for me?"
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