英语作文，帮忙看看有什么语法错误？

1.建议：It is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview。2.错误：“.And ”---去掉and，另起一句或接前句。3.I am a happy girl and a girl of character. I smile a lot / I smile to everyone I meet.4.另起一段（爱好）： I like reading very much and ...

你很谦虚。写的非常棒!!文章中用到的好多高级词汇和复杂句---名词性从句和非限制性定语从句. 我只看出有个别需要改。What a terrible scene!The picture depicts a lot of rubbish piles,which make the fool man feel makes sorry.Obviously,the rubbish piles were made by people,who visited th...

1,I like he sings songs. 错误， I like listening to his songs. 2,working-hard 改成hard-working 3,when he was young(少了一个was) 4, He used to be...others改成He used to help others.5最后一句是问号。纯手打，请采纳！

您好！第一句话有点啰嗦，不应该这样讲，a student of our school，这有些过于中式英语了，你可以直接说I'm the monior of ...class .第二段At first，用的不是很恰当，这不是步骤。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。最后一句话有语法错误，应该是Looking forward to you attend...

at Inner Mongolia.wish her had a good time.it must be a nice journey 容易吗,我 许多谓语动词形式不对 主从句时态搭配不对 过多连续的句子拥有同一主语.它们可以合并成一个.许多时态不符合上下文 对应内容应该是要离校的大学生.可这些错误在高中也不应该有 请楼下的继续指正.还有很多错误 ...

3.melody 一般指乐曲，不指代自然节奏，不如换用rhythm 4.The house would has at least 2 floors.此句不通，情态动词后应为动词的原形不说，would have done指本应该，用法错误。the house may have at least two floors 5.There would be a big hall on the first floor,and there would be...

if there are any（这句话写得很牵强，不过没有语法错误）. A bright future is waiting for us when all the measures are taken seriously implementation.(最后一句有点问题。从中文理解应该是：所有的措施被采取严格的执行。实际上ARE TAKEN在这里是被动了，后面SERIOUSLY修饰taken还是可以理解，至于...

1 warm的比较级是warmer.2 We will waiting是错误的用法，应该用动词原形wait.3 最后一段，All student is agree 是错误的用法，应该用复数形式All students are agreed.4 最后一个单词用复数形式memories.

此句有语病，是否要表达：He made his effort in order to realize his dream.他尽力去实现自己的梦想。He proudly held （helped） up （是否要表示支持？那就改成supported,注意过去时态！）the Oscar.His heart will always have a dream on film.改为：He always had a dream on film in ...

文章写得非常好，语言流畅，地道。以下几点仅供你参考：what the teacher says/what the teachers say in class (如：after class，无冠词)when we are having classes if you have any questions for the answers don't copy others' homework I am sure make progress 虽有一些小小的瑕疵，但...