请帮忙为我的这段英语翻译纠错并润色，如有语法错误请您告诉我，谢谢您的帮助！

发布网友发布时间：2022-04-23 08:54

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热心网友时间：2023-10-08 23:12

Please kindly find the eight attachments is the resume that I choose.
（find和is，双谓语了）
改：Attached please find eight resumes which I chose for your review.

Number 2 and 3 can use English to communicate; the others have a good experience for factory.
(experience不可数，不用a）
改：Candidate 2 and 3 can communicate in English; the others have good factory experience.

Please check I put some simple information as below.
（check和put双谓语，这种情况要用从句）
改：Please check below for the general information I put together.

Please tell me as soon as possible if you feel someone is suitable, I will arrange the interview for you immediately, thanks.
改：Please let me know as soon as possible if you think someone is suitable for the job. I will arrange an interview for the person with you immediately. Thanks.

热心网友时间：2023-10-08 23:12

都是日常商务用语啦：
Please kindly find the eight attachments is the resume that I choose. 要么用Please 要么用Kindly 二者一个就行了；改为：Kindly find the eight attached resumes filtered by me.
the others have a good experience for factory.改为the others have a rich experience in factory.
The brief introction as follows：简单一点
Please let me know the suitable candidates ASAP， in order to arrange the interview for you immediately。

Best Regards，

Aaron你的名字

热心网友时间：2023-10-08 23:13

Please kindly find the eight attachments 【in】 the resume 【】. Number 2 and 3 can 【communicate in English】; 【】 others have a good 【lot of】【experiences】【of】 factory. Please 【take a view of the following brief Inf.】.
Please tell me as soon as possible if you feel someone is suitable, I will arrange the interview for you immediately 【by that time】, thanks.

楼主外企HR高管？好羡慕啊

热心网友时间：2023-10-08 23:13

the eight attachments are the resumes of candidates i have chosen. Among them, No.2 and No.3 can use English fluently, the others are very experienced in manufacturing.Below is some brief information i collect.
please inform me as soon as possible if you feel anyone is appropriate. i will arrange the interview for you right away.thanks