初中英语写作训练案例

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　　英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷，成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会时谁的。

　　要求：1.设想当时的情景，适当扩展细节;

　　2.书写工整，100词左右。

　　参考词汇：top student优等生;handwriting笔迹;full marks满分

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.

　　Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.

　　现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果，写一篇80词左右的短文。

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　　Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.

　　A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.

　　假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。

　　提示：1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物;

　　2.礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸(wrapping paper);

　　3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。

　　要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚;

　　2.80词左右。(信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数)

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　Dear Linda,

　　I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.

　　Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.

　　I hope my advice can help you.

　　Yours,

　　Guo Jia

　　刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob,请你给John回一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右，开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

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　　Dear John,

　　I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.

　　First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.

　　Good luck!

　　Yours,

　　Bob

　　假设上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的.经过，并适当加以评论。

　　要点提示：

　　1.邻桌年轻*声说话、吸烟。

　　2.你请他们不要那样做。

　　3.他们不听，反而嘲笑你。

　　4.你认为：他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

　　年轻人是祖国的未来，应该......

　　参考词汇：嘲笑laugh at

　　要求：

　　1.词数80左右，短文开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

　　2.要点齐全，行为连贯，可适当发挥。

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　　Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.

　　We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.

　　In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.

　　健康对我们来说非常重要，我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议“健康生活”，从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　Good Ways to Keep Healthy

　　It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

　　First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.

　　Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.

　　Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.

　　健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为主题的主题班会，请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

　　1. 保持健康的重要性;

　　2. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;早睡早起;勤洗手;

　　3. 自己的看法(至少一条)。

　　注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2.内容可适当扩展。3.字数60-80词;4.文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

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　　Boys and girls,

　　It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

　　There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

　　Thank you.

　　近20年来，各方面的调查表明：青少年的体质不断下降。请你以“How to keep healty”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，说说你的看法和建议。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　主要内容包括：

　　1.体质下降的原因。如：eat too much junk food, have too much homework...

　　2.合理的健康建议。如：should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(饮食平衡), enough sleep...

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　How to keep healthy

　　Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.

　　Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health.

　　Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students should eat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.

　　节约资源，保护环境，从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生，我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活?请以“My low — carbon life”为题写一篇短文，简述自己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80词左右。

　　提示：1.步行或骑自行车上学;

　　2.节约用水;

　　3.不用塑料袋;

　　4.节约用电;

　　5.充分使用纸张。

　　参考词汇：on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　My low-carbon life

　　Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?

　　Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.

　　It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.

　　10.

　　为配合我市“礼仪宜宾(Charm Yibin)”活动的开展，某学校开展以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语作文，请你以一名中学生的身份写一篇60-80词的短文参赛。

　　内容包括：1.守时，不说脏话;2.礼貌待人，热心助人;3.遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾;

　　注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2.内容可适当扩充。

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　How to behave well?

　　As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.

　　First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

　　Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.