帮我看看有什么语法错误,甚谢,求

发布网友发布时间：2024-03-19 00:36

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热心网友时间：2024-03-19 05:33

I would like to present recommendation about "White pollution"--I would like to talk about the white pollution.
There is no denying that the plastic we used it excessively is destroy our environment----there is no denying that the plastic (that) we uesd excessively is destroying our environment.这里IT多余了，一个句子只能有一个主语，这里的主语应该是PLASTIC；后面的应该是IS DESTROYING ，BE动词后面只能接不定式或者是ING形式。
Although the government have took some measures to prevent our circumstance with which we are living -----although the government have taken some measures to prevent pollution，这里后面的从句句式混杂了，直接改成POLLUTION 比较好；have done 表示完成时态，take的过去分词是taken。
the result was not good that we predicted. Thus, the plastic's pollution still around us.----the result was not as what we expected。不如预期那样用expected比较好，和……一样，用AS表示
plastic pollution就表示白色污染，后面不用加所有格。
Takes measures is needed-----taking measures is needed。take measure 是一个动作，不能作主语，所以要改成动名词形式taking measure。
the ecation that prevent our surrounding is necessary to everyone who must to learn.------the ecation on environment protection is necessary。prevent是阻止的意思，一般用法为prevent…from…protect是保护的意思protection是其名词形式；must后面直接接动词原形而不是不定式。
the media also need to preach the idea that the responsibility of people should prevent for the environment consciously.----the media should also emphasize the importance of human beings's responsibility to the environment。整个后半句结构有点混乱，是中式英语的语法……
I am looking forward your reply----I am looking forward to hearing form you 严格来说是不及物的要接to才能接对象
这个只是我的一点想法可能还有不足的地方希望能帮到你

热心网友时间：2024-03-19 05:34

太多错的了！第一句would like ，时态，保护是protect ，主谓要保持一致！the government has ！Takes 改为taking ！must 加原型！only in this way ！短语搭配！