帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿

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热心网友时间：2022-06-28 23:26

I’m a happy girl， I have many hobbies
这个读出来没问题，写的话不要用逗号，一个句子只能有一个谓语，想用逗号就要加and。
Such as: reading, painting, singing
个人感觉such as换成like更口语化……
But I don’t like fish at all.
可以写I dislike
I like green. And I have many friends
这两句和前边貌似没什么关系，感觉很混乱。
前边说喜欢吃的东西，然后又说喜欢的颜色，然后又说自己有很多朋友……
感觉实在是很乱。而且你后边又写到了你有许多老师。不如把I have many friends放在写老师的后边。
I like green.你是想说你喜欢蔬菜是么？蔬菜的话要用复数greens.
I have many teachers. And I like my teachers.
这句改成I have many teachers and I like them.比较好。
后边加上I have many friends too。

I like English best.这是错句，用最高级必须限定范围，I like English best in my hobby.或者干脆写I like English very much.
And I have a a little brother.这也是错句a little是少量的意思。
后边的his name's ______. 太繁琐了。
直接And I have a brother,_____。就可以
文章中以I开头的句子太多。比如I’m nine years old.I study in MABU school.
I’m a happy girl， I have many hobbies这是四个连续的I，很单调。可改为
I’m nine years old and comes from MABU school.
I’m a happy girlwith many hobbies.
Good morning, everyone! My name is__________, I’m nine years old.I am studying in MABU school.
I’m a happy girl， I have many hobbies. Reading, painting,and singing. I like to eat meat. But I don’t like to eat fish at all. I like green vegetables. And I have many friends.
I’m a good schoolgirl in teachers’ eyes! My school is so nice. I have many teachers. And I like my teachers. Of course, I like English very much. I have a happy family. My mother always says to me: oh, you’re a cute girl!
There are 4 people in my family. My father is a worker. My mother is a worker too. And I have a little brother. his name's ______. he always plays with me. And I love him very much. He is very funny , one day, he was drinking water, I asked he:“why do you drink so much water? ” He said : “I have just had an apple! ”I still couldn’t understand he ,then he told me: “I forgot to wash the apple!”
This is my family. Do you like it?
That's all. Thank you!

这样不错，好好练习啊！

热心网友时间：2022-06-28 23:26

Good morning, everyone! My name is__________, I’m nine years old.I am studying in MABU school.
I’m a happy girl， I have many hobbies. Reading, painting,and singing. I like to eat meat. But I don’t like to eat fish at all. I like green vegetables. And I have many friends.
I’m a good schoolgirl in teachers’ eyes! My school is so nice. I have many teachers. And I like my teachers. Of course, I like English very much. I have a happy family. My mother always says to me: oh, you’re a cute girl!
There are 4 people in my family. My father is a worker. My mother is a worker too. And I have a little brother. his name's ______. he always plays with me. And I love him very much. He is very funny , one day, he was drinking water, I asked he:“why do you drink so much water? ” He said : “I have just had an apple! ”I still couldn’t understand he ,then he told me: “I forgot to wash the apple!”
This is my family. Do you like it?
That's all. Thank you!

热心网友时间：2022-06-28 23:27

热心网友时间：2022-06-28 23:28

文章中以I开头的句子太多。比如I’m nine years old.I study in MABU school.
I’m a happy girl， I have many hobbies这是四个连续的I，很单调。可改为
I’m nine years old and comes from MABU school.
I’m a happy girlwith many hobbies.