为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART...
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时间：2023-10-09 03:55
Hi
Worried:
I’m
sorry
to
know
that
you’re
having
such
a
bad
time
at
the
moment.
The
truth
is
everyone
will
have
one
of
those
periods
when
things
seem
to
be
wrong,
so
you
don’t
have
to
worry
so
much.
The
important
thing
is
to
learn
to
control
your
temper
so
that
you
may
not
do
or
say
anything
you’ll
regret.
Here
are
three
useful
tips:
First,
talk
to
someone
you
trust
about
how
you
feel.
This
is
a
good
way
of
letting
your
anger
out
without
hurting
others
or
yourself.
Second,
go
outdoors
and
play
team
games
with
your
friends，as
physical
exercise
is
an
effective
way
to
get
rid
of
anger
.And
third,
remain
optimistic
about
your
future.
Such
a
positive
attitude
towards
life
can
be
helpful
in
lifting
your
spirits.
I
hope
you’ll
soon
feel
calmer
and
carry
on
as
normal.
Yours，
Jamie
【答案解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求按照Worried写的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰，并提出建议并给出理由。所以考生在写作的时候，要围绕来信的问题一一给与解答。但是光翻译要点肯定不行，还要求考生自己拓展发挥，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。也要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，同时在列举建议和理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second，
Besides,
What’s
more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：a
good
way
of…的好方法，
let
out
释放，get
rid
of消除，
carry
on
继续进行，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：I’m
sorry
to
know
that
you’re
having
such
a
bad
time
at
the
moment.
这句话用了宾语从句，The
truth
is
everyone
will
have
one
of
those
periods
when
things
seem
to
be
wrong,
so
you
don’t
have
to
worry
so
much.
这句话用了表语从句和时间状语从句，
The
important
thing
is
to
learn
to
control
your
temper
so
that
you
may
not
do
or
say
anything
you’ll
regret.
这句话用了不定式做表语和so
that引导的结果状语从句，
talk
to
someone
you
trust
about
how
you
feel.
这句话用了定语从句。文章还使用了合适的连接词First,
Second,
And
third使文章很连贯。
考点：考查提纲类书面表达
