高分请英语高人 翻译一段英文

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热心网友 时间：2024-09-17 14:03

Good afternoon, dear parents. Many thanks to you for taking your time to visit our campus. Our public class is about to start/begin. I hope that your children enjoy their learning experience and have fun at the same time.

真不懂，这么简单的一句话，20多个回答居然没一个准确的——还有不少人非常自信地认为自己的翻译很不错……汗

说all parents者错（画蛇添足）
用parents而不用good afternoon开头者错（不符合习惯）
说taking your time out of your businesses者错（out your business累赘）
用ladies and gentlemen者错（原文不是“女士们、先生们”）
说making time者错（没这种说法）
用guardian者错（监护人？）
说everyone者错（歪曲原文）
用everyone和all重复者错
说attend our school者错（家长来上学还是孩子来上学？）
用came to our school者错（时态错）
说our course immediately began to open者错（纯粹乱来）
用taking part者错（我不说什么了）

热心网友 时间：2024-09-17 14:04

Good afternoon all parents,thank you for taking the time come to our school,we have an open class immediately began,I hope that you will play with the children happy, happy to learn.

热心网友 时间：2024-09-17 14:04

Good afternoon,parents,thank you for taking your time out of your businesses to come to our school，our openclass is beginning soon,I hope that your children enjoy themselves in both entertaining and learning.

家长这个词非要直译的话是patriarch，觉得有点生硬，就用parents了。楼主视情况而定吧
回答者： student000111 - 举人 四级 12-12 12:44

翻译的很正确，我就不多说了。

热心网友 时间：2024-09-17 14:05

各位家长,大家下午好,谢谢你们在百忙之中抽空来到我们学校,我们的公开课马上就开始了,希望你们的孩子玩的开心,学得快乐
Parents, good afternoon, thank you for taking the time to our schools, our course immediately began to open, I hope you will play with the children happy, happy to learn

热心网友 时间：2024-09-17 14:06

Good afternoon,parents,thank you for taking your time out of your businesses to come to our school，our openclass is beginning soon,I hope that your children enjoy themselves in both entertaining and learning.

家长这个词非要直译的话是patriarch，觉得有点生硬，就用parents了。楼主视情况而定吧