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热心网友时间：2024-07-04 07:46

face the question of where to work, metropolis or small cities.

the first -- the first one

also can give rise to many difficulties -- also can bring more difficulties

air condition是空调的意思。 ---- air quality

what’s more,前面应该是句号。

your pressure coming from work and society 不用coming. 直接from就行

busy pace -- busy paced

for your taste. - for you.

a peace of mind - a peaceful mind

above all - after all

working in metropolis or small city just depends on your own pinion. - it depends on your own opionion to work in .....

热心网友时间：2024-07-04 07:47

small cities
means去掉s
condition,加s
pay more attention to living in ..
small cities
your pressure coming from work and society may become a big problem中的become加s
A small city can leave you a peace of mind中leave改为give
small cities

热心网友时间：2024-07-04 07:47

After graation, many college students may face the problem of where to work,in big cities or in small towns. Many of them may tend to choose the first. In their opinion, metropolis means more chances, better living condition,s and a higher social status. However, working in the big city also can give rise to many difficulties,for example, you should pay more for you living necessities, and the air condition is not as good as in a small city, What’s more, your pressure from work and from other poeple in society may become a big problem. After all, if you prefer a busy pace and challenging life,the big city may be a better choice for you.

Nowadays, more and more people are interested in living a cozy country life. A small city can leave you a peace of the mind, and, obviously, it is good for your health. People today face high pressure and they are tired of living in high pace. So they choose to stay in a small city, just to enjoy the pleasure of a cozy life after a day's hard work
.Anyway, working in the metropolis or a small city is just up to you to decide...... .