初学英语写日记，求指导~ 每日一篇，有不对的地方帮忙改正一下，谢谢~~ （9）

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热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:22

1. Today, I want to say something about learn English.
about 是介词，后面加动词要是ing形式
2.Two weeks have passed I'm not sure my English level improve.
这是两个句子，中间要逗号隔开，后句加and; 或者直接句号分两句
I'm not sure my English level improve. my english level 是单数形式，后面动词也应为单数,即 improves. 或者改为has improved
或者你也可以把这个句子写成：I‘m not sure whether my english has improved or not. （我不确定我的英语是否提高了）
3.My diarys have some funny mistakes because of my poor English.
diary 的复数形式是diaries, 去y变ies.
一般主语是物的时候，表示“有”，不用have/has, 通常用 there be 句型
如： There are some mistakes in my diaries because of my poor English.

4.I really appreciate your help of corrected the mistakes.
of 介词，同1， + doing
appreciate 后面加for比较合适，为了什么而感谢。
整句可以改成： I really appreciate your help for correcting the mistakes.
或者写成 It's highly appreciated that if you could help me to correct the mistakes.
5. Maybe watch English movies is a good idea.
动词短语 做主语，要用ing 形式，maybe是副词
Maybe watching English movies is a good idea.
6.Could you recommend a few movies to study English?
a few 改为any 比较符合语境
a few 表示，很少，几乎没有的意思

我觉得看些 迪斯尼的动画片对于初学者来说是很不错的，卡通片英语比较简单，清晰。可以尝试下

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:22

Today, I want to say something about learning English.
Two weeks have passed , but I'm not sure my English level has been improved.There are some funny mistakes in my diaries because of my poor English(表示”某处有某物“用there be句型，而不是用have来表达）. I really appreciate your help of correcting the mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?
从你的一些重复错误中看出一些问题，其中一点：介词后面接动词的话用动词的ing形式。
我最喜欢的电影之一《海上钢琴师》————推荐

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:23

Today, I want to say something about learning English. Two weeks have passed , I'm not sure whether my English level has improved or not. There are some funny mistakes in my diries because of my poor English. I will really appreciate it if you can help me to correct these mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend some movies about studying English?
【阿甘正传】

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:23

Today, I want to say something about learning English.
I'm not sure weather my English have been improved a little or not even if i have studied hard for two weeks. sometimes my diarys have some stupid mistakes because of my poor English. I really appreciate that you help me correcte these mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?电影《劫车》《小鬼当家1，2》《加菲猫》

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:22

1. Today, I want to say something about learn English.
about 是介词，后面加动词要是ing形式
2.Two weeks have passed I'm not sure my English level improve.
这是两个句子，中间要逗号隔开，后句加and; 或者直接句号分两句
I'm not sure my English level improve. my english level 是单数形式，后面动词也应为单数,即 improves. 或者改为has improved
或者你也可以把这个句子写成：I‘m not sure whether my english has improved or not. （我不确定我的英语是否提高了）
3.My diarys have some funny mistakes because of my poor English.
diary 的复数形式是diaries, 去y变ies.
一般主语是物的时候，表示“有”，不用have/has, 通常用 there be 句型
如： There are some mistakes in my diaries because of my poor English.

4.I really appreciate your help of corrected the mistakes.
of 介词，同1， + doing
appreciate 后面加for比较合适，为了什么而感谢。
整句可以改成： I really appreciate your help for correcting the mistakes.
或者写成 It's highly appreciated that if you could help me to correct the mistakes.
5. Maybe watch English movies is a good idea.
动词短语 做主语，要用ing 形式，maybe是副词
Maybe watching English movies is a good idea.
6.Could you recommend a few movies to study English?
a few 改为any 比较符合语境
a few 表示，很少，几乎没有的意思

我觉得看些 迪斯尼的动画片对于初学者来说是很不错的，卡通片英语比较简单，清晰。可以尝试下

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:22

Today, I want to say something about learning English.
Two weeks have passed , but I'm not sure my English level has been improved.There are some funny mistakes in my diaries because of my poor English(表示”某处有某物“用there be句型，而不是用have来表达）. I really appreciate your help of correcting the mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?
从你的一些重复错误中看出一些问题，其中一点：介词后面接动词的话用动词的ing形式。
我最喜欢的电影之一《海上钢琴师》————推荐

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:23

Today, I want to say something about learning English. Two weeks have passed , I'm not sure whether my English level has improved or not. There are some funny mistakes in my diries because of my poor English. I will really appreciate it if you can help me to correct these mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend some movies about studying English?
【阿甘正传】

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:23

Today, I want to say something about learning English.
I'm not sure weather my English have been improved a little or not even if i have studied hard for two weeks. sometimes my diarys have some stupid mistakes because of my poor English. I really appreciate that you help me correcte these mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?电影《劫车》《小鬼当家1，2》《加菲猫》

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:22

1. Today, I want to say something about learn English.
about 是介词，后面加动词要是ing形式
2.Two weeks have passed I'm not sure my English level improve.
这是两个句子，中间要逗号隔开，后句加and; 或者直接句号分两句
I'm not sure my English level improve. my english level 是单数形式，后面动词也应为单数,即 improves. 或者改为has improved
或者你也可以把这个句子写成：I‘m not sure whether my english has improved or not. （我不确定我的英语是否提高了）
3.My diarys have some funny mistakes because of my poor English.
diary 的复数形式是diaries, 去y变ies.
一般主语是物的时候，表示“有”，不用have/has, 通常用 there be 句型
如： There are some mistakes in my diaries because of my poor English.

4.I really appreciate your help of corrected the mistakes.
of 介词，同1， + doing
appreciate 后面加for比较合适，为了什么而感谢。
整句可以改成： I really appreciate your help for correcting the mistakes.
或者写成 It's highly appreciated that if you could help me to correct the mistakes.
5. Maybe watch English movies is a good idea.
动词短语 做主语，要用ing 形式，maybe是副词
Maybe watching English movies is a good idea.
6.Could you recommend a few movies to study English?
a few 改为any 比较符合语境
a few 表示，很少，几乎没有的意思

我觉得看些 迪斯尼的动画片对于初学者来说是很不错的，卡通片英语比较简单，清晰。可以尝试下

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:22

Today, I want to say something about learning English.
Two weeks have passed , but I'm not sure my English level has been improved.There are some funny mistakes in my diaries because of my poor English(表示”某处有某物“用there be句型，而不是用have来表达）. I really appreciate your help of correcting the mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?
从你的一些重复错误中看出一些问题，其中一点：介词后面接动词的话用动词的ing形式。
我最喜欢的电影之一《海上钢琴师》————推荐

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:23

Today, I want to say something about learning English. Two weeks have passed , I'm not sure whether my English level has improved or not. There are some funny mistakes in my diries because of my poor English. I will really appreciate it if you can help me to correct these mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend some movies about studying English?
【阿甘正传】

热心网友 时间：2023-10-24 00:23

Today, I want to say something about learning English.
I'm not sure weather my English have been improved a little or not even if i have studied hard for two weeks. sometimes my diarys have some stupid mistakes because of my poor English. I really appreciate that you help me correcte these mistakes. And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?电影《劫车》《小鬼当家1，2》《加菲猫》