求英语高手,写了一篇邀请函,请指出错误的地方

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热心网友时间：2022-06-21 07:44

Dear Mary,
How is it going?
I will marry Davy on July 12th and a small party in honor of our wedding will be held at Binghai Hotel at 10:00 in the morning.
I sincerely hope you can join us.
Looking forward to meeting with you.
Yours'
Ling

粗略的修改了下，你的问题在于介词的使用，老外文化的理解和认识。
当然，我的修改也不一定都恰当。

热心网友时间：2022-06-21 07:44

Dear Mary,

How've you been?
Let me tell you something about myself. I will marry Davy on July 12th and at 10 o'clock we will have a small party in the Binghai Hotel. Hope you'd join us.

Looking forward to seeing you,
Ling

热心网友时间：2022-06-21 07:45

Dear Mary,
How is everythng going? I'd love tell you something about me . I'll marry to David on 12th ,July.We decide to hold a party in Binhai Hotel at ten clock that day . Wish you to join us !
Yours,
Ling