明天要交的英语作业，求改错，求改病句。谢，为了防止有人恶意刷钱，好的话再给10金币。
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发布时间：2022-04-25 06:59
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时间：2023-11-05 09:28
If you have some short crayons,you【 could——can】 make a colourful candle. It is very beautiful and useful.
【Make——Making】 this colourful candle, you should have a crayon, some wax and a piece of thread.
【First——最好改为Firstly,表示层次顺序】,you should cut lots of clastic crayon. Then put 【them——it】into the wax.
【Second——Secondly】, you should pinch the wax with clastic crayon very hard. If the wax 【加looks/seems】to be very beautiful, you 【could——can】 stop.
【Third——Thirdly】,【you should put the wax in a small lid.】 Then put the thread around the wax. the colourful candle is finished!
祝你开心如意！O(∩_∩)O~~
热心网友
时间：2023-11-05 09:28
If you have some short crayons,you【 could——can】 make a colourful candle. It is very beautiful and useful.
【Make——Making】 this colourful candle, you should have a crayon, some wax and a piece of thread.
【First——最好改为Firstly,表示层次顺序】,you should cut lots of clastic crayon. Then put 【them——it】into the wax.
【Second——Secondly】, you should pinch the wax with clastic crayon very hard. If the wax 【加looks/seems】to be very beautiful, you 【could——can】 stop.
【Third——Thirdly】,【you should put the wax in a small lid.】 Then put the thread around the wax. the colourful candle is finished!
祝你开心如意！O(∩_∩)O~~
热心网友
时间：2023-11-05 09:28
If you have some short crayons,you【 could——can】 make a colourful candle. It is very beautiful and useful.
【Make——Making】 this colourful candle, you should have a crayon, some wax and a piece of thread.
【First——最好改为Firstly,表示层次顺序】,you should cut lots of clastic crayon. Then put 【them——it】into the wax.
【Second——Secondly】, you should pinch the wax with clastic crayon very hard. If the wax 【加looks/seems】to be very beautiful, you 【could——can】 stop.
【Third——Thirdly】,【you should put the wax in a small lid.】 Then put the thread around the wax. the colourful candle is finished!
祝你开心如意！O(∩_∩)O~~
