求高中英语短文改错!!

发布网友 发布时间：2022-04-25 15:10

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热心网友 时间：2023-10-11 08:56

Some of my classmates don't want to have PE class.They think it is a waste of time.However,PE is my favorite subject.I always looking forward to the PE classes.During the PE class, we can do many sports such as playing footballs, running and jumping. I benefit a lot from the PE classes for all these exercise help me keep in shape.What's more,a sound body lay a solid foundation to my studies. So I like PE classes very much.建议您采用欲扬先抑的写法，我同学不喜欢PE，但我却把它做为最爱的学科，之后阐述原因，一方面有益身心健康，另一方面可以为其他科目的学习奠定坚实基础。综述，我非常喜欢PE。欢迎采纳，仅供参考。

热心网友 时间：2023-10-11 08:56

1.probable-->probably 前者是形容词，但是居中修饰的是系动词is
2. class come-->class comes class是第三人称单数
3. it is really good enjoyment-->it is a really good enjoyment 虽然enjoyment是不可数名词但是前面有形容词就要加上冠词 a
4. after exercise-->after exercising after要么做介词，后面就要跟动名词；要么做状语从句的引导词，后面就要跟完整句子
5.more better-->much better/删去more better 已经是比较级了，不能再加more，但可以用much修饰程度，或者直接删去
6.classmate-->classmates some of 后面加可数名词复数
7.最后一句是不是漏什么东西了 不大好改
I like PE class because it serves as a good balance mentally to science subjects

热心网友 时间：2023-10-11 08:57

1. probable改成 probably
2. come改成comes3.
3. “I think it is really good enjoyment ”在good前加a
4. more 改成much
5.classmate改成classmates
6. 最后一个is 前面加一个that 或者which

“and do their health and their study”这个地方你写的不全吧，不对的，但是就改一个词的话不好改。
不是一行一行的，不好改，呵呵。
祝你进步~

热心网友 时间：2023-10-11 08:57

probable应改为probably 用副词修饰
come改为comes 单数形式
I like to go out to exercise,改为I like to go out to exercising 这里的to为介词
more 改为much
Some of my classmate 同学用复数形式classmates
do their health health 前面加owns
I like PE class is also a good balance to mental science subjects is also改为which