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Dear Amy,I have a problem,but I’m writing to ask you for(这里改成I’m writing to you to ask for较好) an (把an改为some或者直接去掉an,因为advice是不可数名词)advice.this is a secret,so don’t tell anyone else.My cousin and I used to getting(use to do sth,这里getting改为get)along very well in(把in改为with,get along well with的意思是与----相处融洽) each other and we were good friend(friend要加S).Last week we talked about our plan and we are (把are改为were)planning to spend the summer holidays together,but now I don’t think I want(这里要加一个to) invite him home.Recently I has discovered that he’s started to tell lies.When I told him it was wrong to tell lies。but she(这个人到底男的女的?你打错了,你用him ,he ,his,这怎么蹦出个she来?是he吧?) just laughed at me.“should I keep quietly(keep是持续性系动词,后接形容词,quietly改为quiet) or tell his parents?”