请各位英语高手帮忙修改一下文章

Secondly, when we stay at home ,we also should（是should also而不是also should） keep safe（keep safe应替换为keep safety in mind）. If we are at home alone, we should not use fire（use fire的用法不正确,英文中的用法为make a fire). because we can be(can be 替换为will be...

All in all, there are many advantages to limiting the use of disposable plastic bags and we should stick to it.语法错误都帮你改了，词语也给你换了一些好一点的~我是美国学校的学生，你放心吧~

1.语法有一些错误。2.你没有注明多少字，所以我就按200字的标准了。以下括号是我修改的。Form the chart we can see the change of average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week. It was only 2 hours per week in 1990.Then in 1995, it twice. But it changed a...

For the past few years there have been more and more students ignored the study of Chinese.Now let us discuss why they became like this.First of all we can watch more and more English movies and listen to more and more English song(s) though Internet (which) make English bec...

我的专业是动物考古学。毕业季就要来了，所以我们需要阅读一些英语资料。我这才意识到英语的重要性。所以，我在毕业期间制定了一个学习英语的计划。首先，我必须坚持每天学习英语。其次，对于细节，我会每天读和听有关英语的话题。最后，我的目标是能说一口流利的英语并能读懂论文、文章等。我希望我能...

bring sth to sb我觉得第一处用到bring的地方用to 比for好。 I am really nervous 才对。see a film 而不是watch 。until it is over 吧？relaxed而不是relaxing.应该是感到放松，而不是令人放松。Although it a little rank smell of blood缺谓语动词。Their lives greatly改成They live ...

My favorite pet is the husky. Huskies are a kind of dog. They used to help people in the north pull their sleds. So they are very good at running. Most of their bodies is black except part of their faces which is white. I like their looks as well as the way they act...

service industry can pay more attention to the service.Thank you for your attention. I’m looking forward to your reply.Your sincerely,LiMing 如果你想得到WORD文档的修改可以联系我，我可以发给你，里面那些修改过的字都是用蓝色的，希望可以帮到你，有什么疑问可以问我，很乐意为你解答。

She was good at English but poor in chenistry and I was just right contrary to her.We often helped with each other.she often had a interesting idea.she was simple and unaffected.I felt happy when I stayed by her side.We both liked cole flower very much,we agreed that we ...

more comfortable 3.would like to do所以应改为But I'd like to ride a bike.4.好像现在分词短语不能作句子（只有在生活英语或口语中才会用的）所以For example,riding a bike, driving a car,walking and so on.这个句子你可以改一下，加上谓语和（宾语)或者加上系表结构。希望你满意哦~...