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热心网友时间：2024-10-26 13:16

the moment when you step out of the university, you are considered a fully grown adult , which means from then, you are expected to solve all kinds of problems in your life on your own. your parents, mentors and friends, they may still standing by your side, but they would no longer play the leading role as much as you yourself do. however, among all those problems, there is no doubt that finding of the job comes before everything, you have to deal with it or at least face it in order to go on with anything else. i believe this goes for everyone.

first and foremost, we need to consider the question of 'what kind of job do you want to find ' or what are you intending to do for the rest of your life. as for me, before i made my decision, i asked myself what i am actually good at. upong looking over my degrees again and again, i have finally made up my mind to do something related to my major. i.e. information security. however, being thinking about and actually doing is quite different, because lately, in the process of finding employment i have realised IS is only popular in certain realms, and its starting pay is not as high as the doctors lawyers and business people. despite all the negativities, i was quite determined do to be an IS professional, mainly because i am very interested in doing the related works, just like some great men once said 'interest is the best teacher'. however, after having a few months of real-life experiences, i understand that interest alone would never be enough, so i went on to upgrade myself by attending some extra conducive lessons every now and then.

as for now, i am more confident than ever to say the job i am looking for will only be focusing to the realms which relate to the information security because both my interest and professional knowledges point to this way.

对你专业不太了解。。。字数有点多。。。看到错的请指下

热心网友时间：2024-10-26 13:16

文章1
A Girl
Parks are my favorite places to go. Bathed in the warm and gentle sunshine, I lie on the lawn, holding a poetry book in my hand to read. Occasionally, my attention is drawn away from the book to the scene around me, which is unique in spring.Thought there're birds singing, grass swinging, and flowers smiling, one sharp white figure is gradually taking up my whole view. It's a girl, dressed in a white gown, walking slowly towards me. Breeze brushes my face, and carries the aroma from the girl.
She is strolling down the path while her figure is rising and falling so smoothly and peacefully. The rhythm of her move ments composes an elaborate melody. Her soft hair flows down to her waist, on which the sunshine casts a light of ring. The gown outlines her pretty curves. Her skin looks so delicate that it, I'm sure, must feel as smooth as silk.
Now she is in my reach, only a foot from me. My heart beating in excitement, I swiftly jump up, and bow a little just in the way gentlemen do, motioning a greeting to her. As a response, she turns around and gives me a smile, which reveals her gentleness a desirable character, not judged by appearance but fully perceived by what you find in her eyes. She continues walking and soon is out of sight, but I'm still there, realizing that there is really something left inscribed in my heart.

简评
本文的作者用细腻的文笔描写了他在公园中有一面之缘的一位女孩，并真实地袒露了一个情窦初开的男孩的心理世界。作者将镜头聚焦在这位从远处缓缓走来的女孩：首先映入眼帘的是一个白色的身影，迈着有节奏的步伐，散发出阵阵芳香。女孩渐行渐近，作者观察到了她在阳光的映衬下柔软的头发，优美的身材曲线，丝一般光洁的皮肤，温柔的笑容等。作者对自己内心世界的描写生动而真实：当女孩走近时，他心跳加速，目送她走出视野后，仍感到有什么东西铭刻在心，自然地流露出爱摹之情。文章篇幅不长，美丽的女孩和情窦初开的男孩的形象却深入人心。
文章的语言非常优美，很富有想像力。例如，在作者眼中，The rhythm Of her movements composes an elaborate melody;Her skin looks sO delicate that it，I'm sure，must feel as smooth as silk等。这是描写人物的文章中的一篇佳作。

文章2
Being An Honest Girl
Last summer holiday, I went to the International English summer camp in Shanghai.
On 24th July, my two good friends and I were on duty. When we finished cleaning the classroom, it was about 8:50 in the evening. Then we prepared to go to students’ dorm.
Outside the building, it was very dark. There was only a moon and some small stars in the sky. At that moment, we were all afraid.
On our way to the dorm, I walked in front of them. I was looking at the ground while I was walking. Suddenly, I saw several pieces of paper on the ground. What is it? I was very curious. Then I picked it up. Oh, it was money. It was 45 yuan altogether. Later, one of my friends ran to me, “May, look, I found 5 yuan!” Was this a coincidence? I put the money together. When I got to my bedroom. I gave the money to the teacher. At last, the teacher found the owner.
Money is important, but money is not anything and cannot buy all the things in the world.
Honesty is one of these kinds of things. It’s really important for everyone to be honest. If everyone can be honest, I believe our world will be more wonderful!

热心网友时间：2024-10-26 13:22

什么题目哦楼主想清楚单独M我

热心网友时间：2024-10-26 13:20

什么作文？英文还是语文方面的？我想接了。

热心网友时间：2024-10-26 13:22

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