...一下自己一天的学校生活和学习情况。要求:中心明确、语句通顺,60...

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热心网友 时间：2024-11-05 16:06

My School day
I am a primary school student. I am twelve years old. I usually get up at 6: 00 in the morning, after breakfast I go to school at 6: 50. I have seven lessons in a day. I learn Chinese, Maths, English and other subjects. In the afternoon, I do sports with my friends. In the evening I do my homework and watch TV with my parents. I go to bed at about 9 in the evening. My school life is wonderful. I love my school day.

试题分析： 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，安排好文章的内容。注意文章文体、人称和时态。注意单词的拼写及标点符号的运用。
【亮点说明】1、短文的时态运用很好，因为是校园生活的某一天，所以一般现在时最合适；
2、短文内容充实，介绍了从早到晚的作息时间，以及给时间段的活动。
3、短文结尾用了总结性文字，提升了情感品味。

热心网友 时间：2024-11-05 16:03

My School day
I am a primary school student. I am twelve years old. I usually get up at 6: 00 in the morning, after breakfast I go to school at 6: 50. I have seven lessons in a day. I learn Chinese, Maths, English and other subjects. In the afternoon, I do sports with my friends. In the evening I do my homework and watch TV with my parents. I go to bed at about 9 in the evening. My school life is wonderful. I love my school day.