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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。
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English is a internationally language which becomes importantly for modern world.
[副词错误] a internationally language不符合语法规范。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
[名词错误] 冠词误用,建议将a internationaly改为an internationaly。
[词语错误] 词性误用,建议将internationally language改为international language。
[介词错误] 介词误用,建议将for modern world改为in modern world。
In China, English is took to be a foreigh language which many student choosed to learn.
[动词错误] 建议把 is took to 改成 is taken to/is taking to (Auxiliary Verb Agreement)
[名词错误] 单复数错误,请检查many student后的名词。
[拼写错误] foreigh 拼写错误,可替换选项为:foreign, freight, fore
[拼写错误] choosed 拼写错误,可替换选项为:chooses, choose, chased
[学习提示] 易混词汇: word, vocabulary, language, term, lexicon 均有“文字,词,语言”之意。
They begin to studying English at a early age.
[名词错误] 冠词误用,建议将a early改为an early。
[动词错误] 语法错误,建议将begin to+doing改为begin to+do。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: begin, start, commence, initiate, inaugurate 均含有“开始”之意。
They use at least one hour to learn English knowledges a day.
[搭配错误] 搭配不当,learn...knowledge在本族语中很少使用,建议修改。
[低频警示] english...knowledge 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[词语错误] 用词不当,建议将use sometime to...改为spend sometime doing...。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: knowledge, learning, scholarship 均有“知识,学问”之意。
[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire
In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese.
[词语错误] 用词不当,建议将superior than改为superior to。
[介词错误] 固定用法错误,建议将in addition to改为in addition。
In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language.
[连词错误] 语法错误,连接词though和but在同一个句子中不可同时使用。
[词语错误] 用词不当,建议将in me opinion 改为in my opinion 。
English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China.
[词语错误] 形容词词序错误,建议将English original works改为original English works。
Learning a country's culture, especially its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language.
[搭配错误] 搭配不当,建议将classic...culture改为classical... culture。