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热心网友时间：2023-10-09 18:03

1. The environmental protection on the official websites
Both sites contain separate sections introcing environmental protection, and there is a wealth of classification and mass of the article (没太明白你想表达的意思)， indicating that the two companies take issues of environmental protection very seriously.

2.ISO14001
ISO 14001 is the world’s most popular standard for environmental management. As early as 1998, the first factory of Volvo was granted ISO14001 certification, and two years after the first factory of Toyota received the same certification.

3.The Global Reporting Initiative (GRI)
The Global Reporting Initiative (GRI) is a non-profit organization that promotes economic, environmental and social sustainability. Volvo and Toyota put their '2011' GRI Reports on their websites respectively.

4.Other information
In autumn 2010, the Volvo Group became the world’s first automotive manufacturer to join Climate Saver while Toyota developed its first full hybrid vehicle which is free from NOx, PM or CO2 emissions.

Conclusion
Both websites offer a huge amount of information about what has been done for the environment, and both companies are ISO14001 certified and proce GRI reports. One of the noteworthy fact is that Toyota received its ISO14001 certification earlier than Volvo and Toyota's GRI report is more recent than Volvo. It can be seen that Toyota pays more attention to some environmental protection issues than Volvo.追问非常感谢您的回答，回答的非常好，能够在麻烦您指教一下http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/580868414.html?quesup2&oldq=1。非常的感激。